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Does your Copywriting need some Religion?

Published on 10/20/2017
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By definition, good copywriters can create money out of thin air.” - Ray Edwards

Type “Ray Edwards - copywriter” into Google Search and you will come up with…

“About 171,000 results”

Turns out that Ray is one of the best copywriters in the world.

Tony Robbins is one of his clients…

So is Michael Hyatt and the Chicken Soup for the Soul folks, Jeff Walker (the launch formula guy) and many others...

Ray is a master craftsman and his craft is copywriting

Advertising legend David Ogilvy was one of the first to say  “Consumers do not buy products. They buy product benefits.

Ray Edwards is one the ninja’s of telling the stories of benefits that get consumers to buy products and services (of integrity) that give them the benefits they want…

If you want to hear one of Ray’s great podcast on the subject - go here

Ray is also a committed Christian. He’s not ashamed or afraid to profess the name of Jesus.

So it might not be surprising that this post repeats his “PASTOR” acronym for copywriting success.

Pay attention, this is something EVERY business can use in their business…

The “P.A.S.T.O.R.” model to copywriting that sells...

  • “P” is for PROBLEM
  • “A” is for AMPLIFY
  • “S” is for STORY and SOLUTION
  • “O” is for OFFER
  • “R” is for RESPONSE

If you follow the format you have a template that you can use to successfully market any worthy product or service.

  1. Clearly identify the problem you can solve
  2. AMPLIFY that problem - emphasize it - increase the awareness of what your target consumer already knows she wants…
  3. Tell the story of the solution that YOUR product/service provides
  4. Offer a solution to the problem - YOUR solution
  5. Ask for the sale - the “response” is tantamount to “here is why you should give up some of YOUR money for the solution to the problem we’ve described and be excited about it”

I’m just an apprentice in the world of copywriting. It’s a skill I’m dedicated to studying, learning and honing for as long as I’m in business but it’s always easier to learn from the masters, like Ray Edwards - and you’ll save a lot of time.

Bill Bateman (like Batman with an “E” in the middle) -  Greatly blessed and highly favored

PS - Ray has written a number of best selling books. Everyone is a worthy addition to your library of marketing knowledge…

Here are 3 of his best...

How to Write Copy That Sells: The Step-By-Step System for More Sales, to More Customers, More Often

Writing Riches: Learn How to Boost Profits, Drive Sales and Master Your Financial Destiny With Results-Based Web Copy

Just Get Started: Tips for Starting, Running, and Growing Your Online Business


PSS - do you lack focus in your workday? I know I did. Then I found a simple program called "focus@will" - check it out - I've arranged for a free trial

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